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Meanwhile, in Sonic's world, Sonic was on his usual lap around the world and with his brother/sidekick, Tails, timing how fast he can run across the whole planet! "3..2..1..TIME!" Tails exclaimed as he hit the reset button on his watch. "Now where's Sonic?" he started to look for Sonic when he felt a tap on his shoulder. "Huh?" He looks over his shoulder and sees Sonic standing right there! "Sonic?! Wow that I didn't expect! I guess I owe you." Tails was about to owe his reward when sonic changed his mind.
"Actually, you can keep it. I really changed my mind so never mind about the bet."
"Really? Huh. Well, ok. So what else do you have in mind?"
"Huh? Haven't thought about it.... Although I am kinda thirsty after that rush!"
"I know just the place! Follow m....Huh?"
The ground started to shake just before Tails could finish. Then a lightning bolt struck the ground just inches away from Sonic and Tails! They were thrown back by the force of impact! They were being dragged in the continuous lightning surge and the closer there in, the weaker they got! They eventually whited out......

When Sonic came to, he found himself in what looked like a library and the inside of a giant tree. "Huh? Where am I? What is this place?" Then he remembered something..."Tails? Hey Tails, wake up buddy. Tails?" Tails started waking up. "Sonic? Ugh. What happened? Huh? Uh Sonic, where are we?" Tails asked "That's what I'm trying to find out!" then they heard footsteps approaching! Just in case, Sonic was ready to take on what was coming. "I wonder if they're awake..." said whatever was going downstairs. Then, Sonic and Tails jaws dropped. It's Twilight.

"Oh good your awake. Now, if you can understand English, my name is Twilight Sparkle. So who and what are you?" she said uncertain if they understood her or not. Turns out they can. Sonic was the first to respond: "Well first, we can understand you perfectly. And second, I'm Sonic. Sonic the Hedgehog!" He said as he waggled his finger.  "And I'm Tails. Nice to meet you uh..Twilight. I don't mean to be rude but were you born as a.... horse?" Twilight giggled "Well, Yes I was. What did you think? Guess I was right when I guessed you 2 aren't from here. Am I right?" she asked. Sonic and Tails nodded in response. "Also, you're in Ponyville." "Pony what?" Sonic asked. "Ponyville. You've never heard of it? It's one of the main cities in Equestria!" Sonic and Tails kept staring with puzzled expressions "Wow! You 2 really aren't from here. I'll explain later. Also you guys really know how to make an entrance! This weird portal opened up in the park when I was out studying and you guys popped out all blacked out. So I was kind enough to take you here until you awoke." She said smiling. Then sonic remembered about the portal he saw before he and Tails got sucked in. "Wait a minute, uh Twilight was it?" Sonic asked. Twilight nodded. "Do you remember anything else before you went to the park? Like possibly a lightning strike and the ground shaking?" Sonic questioned. Twilight gasped and remembered "Actually, Sonic, i did see lightning before I went to my studies and 1 second later the ground shook!" Sonic realized this meant another adventure. "And there you have it! Those 2 things are related to something. But what?" sonic wondered. "Anyway, since your new here, want me to show you around town?" Twilight asked. "Sure! it's not like we've got anything else to do." Tails said

Later at the last stop on the tour, Sweet Apple Acres, Twilight introduced Applejack to Sonic and Tails.
"Well, Pleasure making your acquaintance you guys! Any friend of Twilight's is a friend of mine!" Applejack said "Heheh Thanks" Sonic said. Good thing no one found him as an enemy. "Care for some fresh apple pie?" Applejack offered. "No Thanks. I'm kind of full. Speaking of which, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go for a quick lap around the park. See ya guys later!" With an instant, Sonic was gone in a flash, running off and leaving Twilight and Applejack with gaping mouths! They had only seen somepony do that speed one time. "If I were you girls i would start getting used to that!"

Meanwhile in the park Sonic was getting ready to do some laps around Ponyville when something caught his eye... The Everfree Forest! "Whoa, talk about Halloween material and you've got a 1st place winner right here! Seems like a nice place to check out!" Sonic was about to run in and do some exploring then a voice stopped him. "HEY YOU THERE!" the voice said. Suddenly Rainbow Dash dropped from the sky right in front of him. She did not look too happy.

RD: "Where do you think you're off to?"

S: "Whoa! Well I'm just going to check out that forest over there. No big deal really!"

RD: "No big deal? You have no idea what goes on in there! Who are you anyway?"

S: "I'm Sonic the Hedgehog, and if you would step aside that would be nice."

RD: "Not gonna happen! Not until you tell me who you work for! Are you a SPY?"

S: "What? I don't work for anybody! And I'm not a spy!"

RD: "How do I know you're lying? HUH? You look pretty sinister to me!"

S: "Look, just because I look unwelcoming doesn't mean I'm bad! Don't judge a book by its cover!"

RD: "I refuse to believe! Just go back now! Huh?"

Sonic just ignored her and went in. "Hey! Come back here!" Rainbow said trying to get his attention but Sonic just kept going. "Oh no you don't. HA!" Rainbow Dash suddenly went for Sonic but he was faster to dodge! "Whoa! So you want to do the hard way? OK If you say so but I'm just trying to be reasonable." Sonic said. If she won't listen, Sonic had a Plan B!
Meanwhile back in Ponyville, Twilight was introducing Tails to the rest of her friends. Fluttershy was the only pony who hasn't met him yet. "Oh! Hello Twilight! How are you?" she said welcoming her. Then she noticed Tails. "Uh Twilight, who is this?" she asked nervously before crouching down to the ground. Knowing Fluttershy, Twilight could see she was shy when it comes to new people. "Don't worry Fluttershy. He's a friend of mine. His name is Tails, and I just met him today." Tails introduced himself and told Fluttershy the story of what happened until coming here. "Oh! Well it's nice to meet you Tails! Although I've never seen you around..." "Yeah I know. I've heard it before." Tails interrupted. So far, he heard it from any pony he talked to including Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack. "So Tails, tell me about you." Fluttershy said eager to hear more about him. But suddenly a loud boom followed by the sound of a jet engine roared across the area almost blowing off every leaf from the trees. "Sonic!" Exclaimed Tails and Twilight. "Oh! That was Sonic from your story?" Fluttershy asked Tails. He nodded and started to fly off into the Everfree Forest when Twilight stopped him. "Tails Wait! Don't go in there! That's the Everfree Forest!" Twilight Exclaimed. "Uh, the Everfree Forest?" Tails asked. Fluttershy then told Tails all about the forest and how unnatural it is. "That sounds really similar to the place where we live. The Clouds move on their own, if necessary, the animals will care for themselves, and the plants grow on their own" "WHAT!?" Twilight and Fluttershy exclaimed in unison. They never imagined a world that acts like the Everfree forest. "Anyway I gotta go see what Sonic's up to." Tails then ran in the forest to go find Sonic. Twilight and Fluttershy followed. Then couldn't risk if something happened.
Heres pt. 2

Also the pictures credit goes to my friend christian for making it
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I think I've read this story before
cooleevee759 Jan 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
cooleevee759 Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
"Gentlemen" is a phrase commonly used by The Spy in the game Team Fortress 2. The Spy can disguise as enemy players, and players can use a "X is SPY" voice-command when they think a player is really a disguised Spy. When Raindow Dash said "Are you a SPY?" it simply reminded me of The Spy. and I posted a comment with his most famous line, "Gentlemen".
cooleevee759 Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's okay, but if I may point a few things out...
I don't mean to be a critic, but it seems rushed. The grammar isn't right in some places, things are moving too fast, and at some points I can't understand who's talking, either because of the abrupt beginning or the out-of-character speech.
Just a few things I hope you don't mind me pointing out. I had the same issue with my fan fiction until my sister critiqued it. Please don't be offended, I'm just trying to help.
BloodyPink-M Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
cooleevee759 Feb 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
BloodyPink-M Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
you´re welcome n_n
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